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Forever Lost

Fumbling fingers
Groping for reassurance
Wandering mind
Searching for sense

Lost in the dark

Surrounded by
Closing in
Suppressing me

Unable to escape

A veil over my eyes
Cotton in my ears
A sheet smothering my heart

Wandering forever



 

Author notes

Prompt: Black

Pretty self explanitory...

Suggestions always welcome

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  • checkmate-
    October 23, 2008

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    Another sad one!

    A good one, though. I like it

    ~Athena


    • liduen silver member
      October 24, 2008
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      Not sure whats with me and sad poetry right now...

      Thanks for commenting!


  • nevadapoet
    October 23, 2008
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    yes...this is a great entry for black. nicely done. Thanks for the entry.