I'm scatterd threw this life
if this is like I'll say goodbye
he's gone like an angel
with wings that will spread tonight
I see me writin on this paper.
Prayin for some savior.
Wishin intake him and save him.
In a world so, so godless and thoughtless,
I don't know how we wrought this,
All the love that you brought us.
It feels like I'm killin myself.
Just wheelin myself.
Just to pray for some help.
I'd give it all just to have, have your eternity.
Cause it's all that assures me.
It's worth all that hurts me.
I'd give you my heart,
And let you just hold it.
I'd give you my soul,
But I already sold it.
On that day that day,
The day I walked away in December.
I will always remember.
I'll regret it forever.
I remember brown eyes,
So sad and blue skies.
Turned to darkness and night.
I'm so sick of the fight.
I won't breathe unless you breathe,
Won't bleed unless you bleed.
Won't be unless you be,
'Till I'm gone and I can sleep.
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1200 points, ended November 28, 2008, 32 entries
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wow kewl idea here, i really like it, especially the last couple of lines. its a nice ending to a well written poem!
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this is so beautiful and fraught with emotion. looking back on our decisions and wishing them to be different,i have done repeatedly..this really speaks to me thank you
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There is someone that means so much for each of us out there. Maybe one day you will meet someone else this is so sad, deep and meaningful and you have obviously been a part of lifes ups and downs. I found this poem interesting, emotional and passionate.
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