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[ lifes smsh ]

lifes smsh
we crash
snip
smack
crack
like flowers
busting out
of there
roots holding
them back

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  • cre8tiv-writer
    October 23, 2008
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    Wow, there is so much to be said in this short piece. Very riveting!!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    An interesting take on the prompt. I would have liked to have seen a little more detail in this, as I am not sure what you mean by 'snip smack crack'.
    Thank you for your entry
    Gaylene