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[ A flutter in your stomache, ]

A flutter in your stomach,
And a rare happiness overwhelms you.

Your heart skips a beat,
And you forget everything around you.

That one persons voice,
Makes you smile,
Even if it's saying something cruel.

In the middle of anything,
There face pops into your head.

A sadness overwhelms you when there away,
Missing them like you never thought possible.

Worrying about them,
Never stopping to think about yourself.

When in love,
You forget everything,
But yet remember every precious moment,

Every moment with them.

A contest entry

another one that sounds incomplete. srry! but...idk how to describe it when in love. it seems beyond words....*sigh*

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  • DreamerA
    November 9, 2008
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    so true, never stopping to think about u! loved it! thanks for entering and good luckx


  • Handcuffs of Love
    November 2, 2008
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    I love my new pic!!!!!!!!!! Lol. Love you sis!!!! Great poem of course!!!!


  • Handcuffs of Love
    November 2, 2008
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    Awww sis.Faboulus!!!


  • onesugar gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    This us beautiful and sums up love to a T, the last line saying it all.

    Good luck with this in the contest
    ~sugar~

  • The Jigsaw Poet
    October 24, 2008

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    Yes I agree with my sis, this is really lovely and so emotion filled and poignant, beyond words maybe, but this is an amazing and wonderful poem and not incomplete at all


  • catalyst.
    October 24, 2008

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    That was beautiful. I loved the format of it also the emotion in it made it so relatable

  • DreamerA
    October 23, 2008
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    Brilliant

    Wow that was great! Really felt that and believed it... good luck hun!! xxx


  • HarleyOuinn
    October 22, 2008

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    Wow. Sounds familiar.

    -giggle-

    I loved it, darlin'.

    ♥ Your Love Bunneh ♥


  • albinoblacksheep720
    October 22, 2008

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    Wow

    I really like your poem for this contest. It is better than mine. I'm being honest, you're great. I wish you good luck in this contest.


  • Scared Silly
    October 22, 2008

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    lol i knew ud come up w/ somethin for this contest
    i like it

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