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I Am Indrid Cold

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gnipeelS toN mA I

Beyond your sight, hearing, and smell
You will never touch or heed me
But, I certainly, do know you

I‘ve forever been here with thee
From the time ruled by the great cats
And the grand covering of ice

Forever beside you sleeping
I have eternally whispered
Beneath your semiconscious dreams

peelS regnoL oN naC uoY litnU

© Copyrights G. Jones 2008

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    This had an eerie feel to it! And I wonder if they have been there for good or bad.. I'm thinking good!


  • BecomingDawn
    October 25, 2008

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    Creepy

    Voice of the Mothman, or something else entirely? You leave the reader wondering while suppressing the shiver up their spine.


  • Megan Awesome
    October 22, 2008

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    This is interesting. Very different for sure. I have to say though, I didn't understand the part about the cats. But maybe that's just me lol.
    Megan