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The Monster Ball



Ghoulish goblins and ghosts
Will be tonight’s hosts
They’ve sent out a welcome to all
The witches will dance
And the werewolves will prance
To the music of the Monster Ball

There are black cats galore
But you’ll howl for some more
As the fog and the leaves gently fall
They’ll scream in delight
Lit by soft candlelight
As they waltz at their grand Monster Ball

There are tricks and great treats
Always plenty of eats
Most bought at the nearby Ghoul Mall
They’ll dress in their best
To impress all the rest
At the annual fall Monster Ball

They will offer a toast
Up to this years great host
As each monster lifts his own glass tall
They’ll down a big swig
And they’ll all dance a gig
On the dance floor of the Monster Ball

There’ll be boos and soft sighs
Haunting moans, barks and cries
A good time will be had by them all
With food games and fun
They will dance till the sun
Puts an end to this year’s Monster Ball



Author notes

I actually wrote this as a children's book. Anyone here illustrate?

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  • ecrivain01
    June 27

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    Very nice ...

    and very nicely written. I actually got a chuckle out of this, and that's rather rare nowadays, since I am always in so much pain.

    This would be perfect to read at the beginning of a Halloween Party.

    • thanks...I'd love to find someone who illustrates and try this as a childrens book

      • ecrivain01
        July 1
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        Run a contest ...

        for it. There must be a way to do that. I'm sure somebody on this site does illustrations, and doubtless there's more than one.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is so cute. I can totally put an image to the whole thing, and I think it's great that this is written as a chrldren's book. Nice work.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm

  • Angel1002
    October 26, 2008

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    Wow this is great! I read it to my son and he loved it, he asked me to read it again. My compliments to you and good luck in the contest!


  • Sandygram silver member
    October 23, 2008

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    Wonderful Poem

    What a wonderful time was had by all at the Monster Ball. Wonderful imagery. Great write!! Best of luck. Take care. Sandy


  • Wandika gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    So well done Ruth

    Hope all is well with you.
    I am finally finishing my first book of poetry. Funny how things work out. A therapy turning into a passion.
    My wife and I are looking forward to our second Great-Grandchild this December. Not sure we are old enough but guess that does not matter to our Grandchildren.

    Your friend,
    Jim


  • adios muchachos gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    Boo-dacious poem

    Is this an RSVP bash? I got my invitation but it was written
    in invisible ink.
    Nice poem Ruth! Hope you luck in the contest!

    John

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