He looks at me with a feeling
A feeling that I hope I know
As his voice enters my ear
I sense something
The way he holds me
I hear something that is not mine
His actions tease me
If he knows it or not
I could grant him any wish
With no regret
I feel his feelings for me with a kiss
His love is going to my heart
It screams "you're the one"
But, I don't know yet
Prove to me that you're worth it
Prove to me you are only mine
Prove to yourself that you have me only
We cross our lines of the realm of singles
We belong to each other
We do things only we do together
Our love is showing
I fell for you
And, you fell for me
A contest entry
- Love by DreamerA.
750 points, ended November 9, 2008, 18 entries
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im like that - prove it haha! thanks for entering and good luckx xx
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Fantastic
I really enjoyed this piece and can totally relate. My favorite line (perhaps just because of my own experience) "A feeling that I hope I know"... ahh that moment in a new relationship, when you think you know but you can't be sure - yet. -
Oh this is so sweet! If I can point one thing out though ...
His actions teases me
This should be
His actions tease me
Lol, but other than that I thought this was a pretty good poem. Good job.
Megan
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