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The Performance

In your life, where you don't fight
That might just seem the norm
But in my own I'm gonna be,
Something only you could dream
Just sit back now
Just stand still
And see just how I play

Your mind's not playing tricks on you
(But that'll be the day)

I've only just begun - so watch
I've got some more to show
But you bow your head and turn around
It's big kids playtime now

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  • Dragonbabyx3
    October 27, 2008

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    In my mind, I see a person on a Stage, Saying these words, Its a climatic begininning. We are waiting for the finale! I really like this piece, Because I can imagine myself there. Awesome write, Is there another piece to this?