Cut my tears with broken glass
you shattered on the floor
They're useless to me now -
don't need them anymore
My heart is still so heavy
I still can't comprehend
How you could just throw me away
Betray me, just like that
Dear Friend,
You now mean NOTHING
Don't put on like you do
Your life is not a stage
No one is looking at you
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OMG!!!!!
In such a small piece you have made such a well written read,completely enjoyable, very nice i read like it, your static B,C -A,B ryhming every now and then links in well good job i liked it alot. -
Wow. This is stunning. Has a huge impact. "Cut my tears with broken glass" and "Your life is not a stage" are my favorite lines. Powerful words for powerful thoughts. People have to stand up for themselves, and this is a great example of that! Love it.
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wow, powerful indeed. It hits home with me due to a "friend" that decided to fuck me over by trying to burn me for something i didn't do so the girl who did would still buy him alcohol. The entire year I've known him and everything that we've been through were just abolished then and there. Well, anyways I'm going on my own thing here, and I must say that I really do enjoy the write, and hope that you put up the other ones you wrote.
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wow powerful wright
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This is VERY good, The pain, the hurt. Rolls of the tounge into emotion so fine, that cuts into the heart. I loved it!
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Beautiful ! It flows well .I can relate with this one.And it's really good since you wrote it in a short period of time .
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