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Lavender Flames

Flames of destruction.
Burning and destroying.
Horror.
Sweet horror.
With serenity of lavender.
Beautiful destruction.

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  • Emmyb gold member
    March 24

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    i love how you have blended soft lavender with such noisy words.
    well done on this terrific write.


  • dustookie2
    February 19

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    It is the power of the lavender being the sweet serenity which is purple passion or all the mix of purple hue blended into words of this short poetic reflection. Brilliant title supported by your introduction with the ending taking me back to the beginning as I leave lingering in the thought of violet destruction. Nicely penned. Good luck in the contest


  • xmiasmatik
    February 16

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    sweetness. Its short and powerful, with a bitter yet syrupy feel. More black than purple, but I still lovee it.


  • ASmileForYou
    December 11, 2008
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    Wow, this was a very well written poem! Very nice!


  • Anu-Nataraj
    November 29, 2008
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    hey u din put ur ap name and your page link in ur author notes...


  • Anu-Nataraj
    November 29, 2008
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    hey u din put ur ap name and your page link in ur author notes...

  • Anu-Nataraj
    November 29, 2008

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    wowow
    amazing metapgor..short poem though

    but i believe big things come in small packages !!

    and yours is the perfect example !hahahahaha

    good luck !

  • piccola silver member
    November 25, 2008

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    short and sweet. Very discriptive ... the beautiful destruction at the end left me questioning how any destruction can be beautiful ... still I liked it.


  • dustytiger
    November 15, 2008

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    wow this is quite the write and from such a young writer, it's short but it really packs quite the punch, i can see why you like it so much, best of luck in the contest


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    It's very simple, but the image it illustrates is very nice. And think there's something to it so don't let anyone make you think otherwise. ^_^

    Thanks for entering
    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    Oi! First things first, there is a misspelling in the very first line! I also found it curious that you used the same words (lavender, destruction and horror) twice each in a fifteen word poem, plus the title.

    Please feel free to enter another piece but this one just doesn't do it for me! Sorry!!

  • Kitch
    October 24, 2008

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    wow again

    another amazin short poem and u are ryt. destruction, and lots of other 'horrid' things, are beautiful in their own way

    keep writing

    x


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    October 23, 2008

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    I like how you use the oxymoron idea of a 'beautiful' destruction, almost as if it's a blessing, or something that will give glory or enlightenment. Nicely wrote.


  • BehindTheShadow
    October 22, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt. Best of luck to you.

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