a misguided comet
shone a light
for me,
I hope it shone
for you
too.
Author notes
PROMPT:
1. Lets just pretend that everything I say matters to you and everything you do doesn't hurt.
15 words.
In a list
A contest entry
- 15/15♥Prompt Quickie by xxRainbowDawnxx.
550 points, ended October 23, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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amazing
for so little words
and aww
man good job
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oooh I like this.
ahaha I have a poem called another misguided comet
I love that.
and I LOVE THE LAST THREE LINES
THEY HIT SO HARD -
I like how you took this a little differently. Kind of reminds me of a feeling I have quite a lot recently. I also like how it can be interpreted as mocking, in a sense.
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I love the prompt you had to write from. Good way of portraying it.
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