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Where is my Love?

Where is my love?
Shouldn't I get it?
Where is my love?
I don't benefit.

It's not mine to have,
Not mine to know,
I've given it up,
Lost all my glow.

Where is my hope?
Did it ever exisit?
Where is my hope?
Falling from my wrist.

It's not mine to have,
Not mine to know,
I've given it up,
Lost all my glow.

Where is my reason to live?
Did that abandon me too?
Where is my reason to live?
I gave it up for you.

It's not mine to have,
Not mine to know,
I've given it up,
Lost all my glow.

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Option 36.

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  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    February 20

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    I liked this, I thought that it was beautiful and kind of sad. "It's not mine to have,
    Not mine to know,
    I've given it up,
    Lost all my glow." These lines are nice, they remind me of a song. Nice write.