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Stupid Boy

Stupid Boy can't you see
you're nothing
a hopeless virgin
seeking absurd notions of love

Stupid Boy can't you see
these ideals are worthless
an archaic way of thinking
humbling and sincere

Stupid Boy can't you see
you must follow
we have all the pleasures
and a hundred-fold the pain

Stupid Boy can't you see
we will break you
mold you to our ways
unless you transcend us all

And find wisdom this day.

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  • Dancing Feather gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    This is a wonderful poem. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.



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