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Together Forever

Missing image

 

   cradling your gravestone

        as time slips away

            united are we

        in deaths embrace

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • individuality gold member
    May 17

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    ah death's embrace - for some it can be the desire, it makes me think of people who have been married many many years and one of them dies, so the other is left alone and in sorrow so they want to join their love rather than be stuck in a dead life.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2

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    Awww this is so sad, but as long as you love someone, nobody can get between you nor nothing including death. For love is eternal, love is beyond life and death.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008

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    The love in this breaks my heart as they are apart in body
    Perfectly beautiful


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 1, 2008
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    Thank You for Your Entry

  • Tercarro
    October 28, 2008

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    Very nice

    Short but great. It's tough to write such short pieces and make it work but I think you did it.
    TC


  • Super-man
    October 25, 2008
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    Beautiful

    If that person knew, you were last to love them

    Stunning.

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