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Living In Your Bursts Of Oxygen.

When you said you were my firefly, sweetheart,
i never thought you'd ever dream of flying away.









[faster, faster away,
poisonous&wild,
we crept inside the stolen contents of a broken lover's nightmare,
sucking traces of the smoke circles in our pockets,
breathing in&out gusts of dirty oxygen]








We used to laugh at all the broken hearted people,
but now we've become them.

Author notes

Automatic Loveletter.
Paramore.
Dashboard Confessional.

"We are broken, what must we do to restore our innocence
& all the promise we adored?"

"& this drama-filled fest is all my fault, i guess."

"i wipe these make-up smeared eyes to show that i tried."

"exhale; another wasted breath"

"out of touch; out of time."

I'm broken up inside.
I am so hollowed out.


All of the goodnight kisses are wasted with these closed lips,
parting slower & slower and dying quicker.

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  • redhanded
    February 6

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    omg wow I love this. thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you in this contest and in the future
    andi
    (redhanded)

  • whitewinged1
    December 4, 2008

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    Hey stranger ...been a while eh? You know , your way with words and the unique way that you place them never stops impressing me. You certainly have an amazing gift...great write!...c u around, take care.


  • kirsten.
    October 24, 2008
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    Love it sweetie.
    <3