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Agree With Me So We Can Say

What are we to do now?
Even with a new president
Going to rise.
Our world is dying young,
I'm sure you agree.
Too many problems,
Too little days.

We may be young,
But when we say words,
Just about no one but us
Seems to listen.
And we all know that won't change,
Until we grow older,
Until we know better.

But we already know better,
I'm sure you agree.

Just come to my side,
'Cause your my kind.
We the youngens,
May have no say,
But just yell louder,
So they can hear us,
So we can say.

We already know better,
I'm sure you agree.
I know you can roar,
Just yell louder,
So they can hear us,
So we can
          Say.....

Author notes

Well, the titles still kinda iffy for me. Help?

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  • HEY SYN!!!

    I really like it!!! good job on this one. I wrote a poem kinda like this one called "Circles and Slashes" I agree the title is a little akward, but the content of your poem is pretty good!

    Five stars from me my friend =)