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My Mortal Body...



Underneath these rags
my clothes, that hide
is a display of art
and abstract oddessy
And to look at me
you'd think of me
as a normal girl
but who is to say
what is normal
and what is not?


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Credit Artist My_mortal_body_by_LadyTadriendra
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  • Leonura
    October 25, 2008
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    a truly thought provoking poem. something that really opens the eyes of the reader.