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dear love

dear love,

i look around,
cant believe we lived here
i cant believe we died here

i have not forgot you, but you cant seem to see
that i must dwell alone
everyday you say hello and i must say goodbye
everynight you fall asleep and i must cry

dear love,

i glance at  your old picture
and i dare to remember
my 19th birthday in september

i have not forgot, but you seem to think
that i can hug you
and not love you
like i dont need you


dear love,

i hold myself,
and think of your laughter
and how we will be again, never

i have not forgotten you, and you cant seem to believe
that you said hello today and i didnt even blink
as i brushed right past you
i pretend like i did not know you


but i have not forgotten you


dear love,



                              goodbye


                        .me.


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  • ratkos
    November 12, 2008

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    This write is so sad and meaningful .i bet a lot of people can connect with this one.I know I can. thank you for the beautiful write

  • Mickie27
    November 9, 2008

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    Packed full with emotion and shouting out loud, with depth and passion!!!! This is a sad write and full of emotion, good luck in the contest.

  • double-u
    November 7, 2008
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    great

    just great