dear love,
i look around,
cant believe we lived here
i cant believe we died here
i have not forgot you, but you cant seem to see
that i must dwell alone
everyday you say hello and i must say goodbye
everynight you fall asleep and i must cry
dear love,
i glance at your old picture
and i dare to remember
my 19th birthday in september
i have not forgot, but you seem to think
that i can hug you
and not love you
like i dont need you
dear love,
i hold myself,
and think of your laughter
and how we will be again, never
i have not forgotten you, and you cant seem to believe
that you said hello today and i didnt even blink
as i brushed right past you
i pretend like i did not know you
but i have not forgotten you
dear love,
goodbye
.me.
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Comments
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This write is so sad and meaningful .i bet a lot of people can connect with this one.I know I can. thank you for the beautiful write
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Packed full with emotion and shouting out loud, with depth and passion!!!! This is a sad write and full of emotion, good luck in the contest.
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great
just great


