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Melancholy Moment

The curtains dance in the post rain breeze, rhythmically.
I lay in my warm, cozy bed, feeling melancholy.

I cherish my time alone. 

I close my eyes, you appear.

The scent of the afternoon rain disappears and is replaced
with your scent, which causes me to hug my covers tightly.

Drifting off to sleep....... with you.

Mlk63

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  • Providence
    October 23, 2008
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    Lovely. This reminds me of long mornings lazing in the afterglow. Well done.

    Marianne


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    Magnificent as usual!!!!!!!   You are a great poet!!!!!!!!!
    I have missed you unique and imaginative style of writing...... Welcome back!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Joyce


  • Debbysmiles gold member
    October 22, 2008
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    Rich imagery here. You painted quite a romantic scene with your words. Blessings. d


  • suseann
    October 22, 2008
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    Dreams are the best though aren't they now! Romantic and assuring poem. Positivity echos in it.