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Peering Through the Veil into the Light

Bounty's season has come to pass.
And on this night, the veil is thin.
Honoring those whose time has past,
Calling communion with them again.

Our Bonfire's lit and our alter's fixed,
At the ready with dark and light.
With fortitude in ritual imbued,
Summoning creation to sit things right.

Burnt ash circle connection complete ,
We call upon the dual deity's  power.
To open the portal betwixt between,
Inviting ancestors here in this hour.

Seeking forgiveness of misguided deeds,
We offer up yearly Autumns harvest.
Blessings bestowed us and those we grieve.
Beseeching forgiveness in cloak of darkness.

May all our souls find blessed amends,
In Samhain's night of spiritual cleanse.



Author notes

Where there's a will,there is a way. Blessings to all on this powerful eve for many more future seasons blessed in light and love.Vague,but to each their own in their own guided way.

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  • queens1
    November 9, 2008

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    This fits perfectly with the "Dia de los Mortes" celebrations in Mexico and the Southwestern US. Excellent.
    Patty


  • Blue Rew silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    Hmmm, it seems Amulet beat me to the theme...you've entered your talents in her seasonal contests and mine stay lonely
    This is wonderful, so much to take from it...
    each stanza setting a scene and carrying it
    through with defined meaning. It reads to
    me just like an incantation. Blue


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 5, 2008

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    Blessed Samhain indeed This is a really well done piece. You've managed to fit quite a lot of it in a few lines and really pulled it off quite well. I truly enjoyed this, excellent


  • torn dragonfly
    November 5, 2008
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    this is incredible. perfect message, perfect flow. mmhm.


  • jazzcat gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    Nice job. I've been toying with a poem for this contest, but you nailed it so well. You imbibe the poem with a real feeling that goes beyond the theme. I look forward to reading more of your work.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    love and blessings
    beautiful write from the heart
    an honor to read
    God bless you my friend...

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