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Dirt and Dimonds

from dust and lust we all do shine

with bodies intertwined

all our heart are shining red

with blood flowing from our veins

are we all not human

for all of us are dirt that shines higher and prettier than any diamond

so as we go on living our lives as those forgotten and hideing in the shadows

let us remember the way that even the biggest diamond was once.........

.....nothing more than a little piece of dirt

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  • The Cube
    October 23, 2008

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    Excellent. A good insight about how Diamonds are, in a sense, made from dirt. Not too abstract for my taste, but a good entry for the contest.


  • FloatingFlower
    October 22, 2008

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    Good

    Nice work. Very nice. I like how you pointed out: Are not all human.

    THanks and keep writing.
    Feel free to check out my newest 2 poems.
    Fromloatingflower