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Night with no moon

love is the killer snapping branches
plain-old shed thick wooden doors
a soul willing to go very deep

[somnolent visionary woman plays well with others]

it was alluring
unassuming the sweet science
wondering

wedding night sex wouldn't be satisfied
unforgettable characters under your skin

the watchful eye was not surprised

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  • Abby Eyeball
    December 11, 2008

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    hmmm, this piece escaped my attention. i love it! there are so many directions this is taking my mind, and it just makes me smile.

    -Abbs