Dear, he’s so distinct & out of reach
While she lies there wired & awake
There’s no stopping him now
Barely any mercy will escape
Fight, he never stops
He marches into death & brings glory back
Her blood he sheds & love he takes
No stopping him for he’s on track
Take him away, he’s simply a mistake
She dies today, don’t tell me fate
Victory & Glory … Defeat & Forsaken
A contest entry
- Just arrived by special delivery by Black Rayne.
500 points, ended November 12, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very interesting write
i enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to enter
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thanks! :]]
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I completely second Masroor's comment! Awesome write! You are brilliant Hailee
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Short, strong in it's meaning and imagery, and a great poetic structure. This poem made me visualize the image that you have portrayed, making this poem a worthy read. Keep it up! Need more poetry!
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