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Sail Away With Me

 

 

 

Perfect day

 

the sky is so clear

 

clouds moving overhead

 

as eagles fill the sky

 

sail away with me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Picture Prompt
20 Words

Jeremy0826

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  • spiritualangel
    November 6, 2008
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    Such a soft coolness. Beautifully expressed.Best of luck.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    I love your take on the prompt. I did try to write for this, but darn nothing came to mind.. you've done an excellent job with this poem.

    good luck in the contest.
    kat


  • Dragonbabyx3
    October 30, 2008
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    hmmm, I think it would be better if you left out "tonight" Because with that there you make the reader want more, what happens "tonight?" ok anyway, I like it! I love the picture you used as well, I love the ocean, and anything to do with it! Great Write!