Lips of crimson sacrifice
flesh bejewelled in pearls
eyes of blood reflection
framed by ashen curls.
Dementia of fellated dreams
droplets kiss her breast
her parted lips in ecstasy
engorge her bloodied fest.
Eyes that see within your soul
a whisper on her breath
impale your self on blackened swords
accept her pallid death.
Author notes
Picture credit and Prompt :
f.] http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/supergongie/mi-1.jpg
"The itsy bitsy spider climbed up the water spout"
A contest entry
- My first contest :) Loads of Options, Allowing Pre-writes. Come in and see:D by chilali.
700 points, ended November 5, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short and amazing. Nice take on the picture and great imagery. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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This is wicked. I would put which part was my favorite but that would just end up being the entire thing. Your diction is genious and the picture adds a hounting touch. I got shivers up my spine reading this. Best of luck in the contest!
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good take on the prompt . . liked "Lips of crimson sacrifice" and "accept her pallid death" . . good first and last lines . .best of luck in the contest
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