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Caressing My Love!

His lips touched mine
melting my heart
like the snow
on a sunny day
the chills descended
upon my body
being warmed
by his gentle touch
his hands
caressed my face
with pure love
caring about only
this present moment
where two hearts
beat as one
for the very first time!

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  • vivuyo
    November 1

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    happy heart,
    wow!! hahahaha!!!
    so very sweet and lovely composition!!

    you are a woman of amiable decision.
    you are very optomistic as i can sense in your poems.

    please write more..


  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 11
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    lost in those moments - ah love. a sweet tender depiction of the impact of loving touch. pretty words.

  • Bob Fox
    July 9

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    Poet

    Oh yes. That very first time. And we feel such wonderful emotions until the realities set in. Oh make it new once again. lovely write poet.

  • Valentines Sting
    January 14
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    tender

    This reminds me of my first kiss under the school bleachers.


  • cutting the pain
    October 22, 2008
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    I LOVE THIS

    this reminds me of the first time my Fiance kissed me.
    its a good write

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