Running, lungs seizing, legs cramping
Just gotta get out
All these things in my head
Consuming me, owning me
What once used to be abominable
Now in my mind the ideal
I'm turning into a beast
Devouring all that is beautiful
All that is comforting, all that is pure
Leaving only the acidic lies
Destroying the souls that dare love me
Don't get close to me
Please don't long to save me
See the destroyed souls
Their cries hang on the air like a fog
See the sickening beast I've become
Watch out, you might just go under
One moment I'll love you
The next I will destroy you
And I'll laugh as your heart dies
The darkness will become your home
There is no light, no saving grace here
Disturbia
Author notes
I think it could be edited and made better, which I'll do sometime soon. Rihanna's Disturbia! One of my favorite songs and I don't even really like Rihanna much. Maybe it's because the song is so dark.
Annnnd The itsy bitsy spider climbed up the water spout
A contest entry
- My first contest :) Loads of Options, Allowing Pre-writes. Come in and see:D by chilali.
700 points, ended November 5, 2008, 52 entries
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Comment Number One
Beautiful Imigary. I wrote imigary wrong. Isn't that awesome! haha ok again the Imagery Yay!!! I'm sramt...and dislexic-wannabe. Anyway. This is wonderful and wonderful and OMGosh!!! Wonderful! I think the song I am listening just said flatulence... LMAO!!!! And yes I will be counting.
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Well I've never heard the song, but this piece is out standing. It kinda makes you think wearwolves, which is OK with me cause I write about them too. I really like this one I give it a thumbs up.
Cheryl
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I don't know if I told you thanks for this already...but Thanks! Always appreciated!
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Great write! Thank you so much for your entry. One thing though. You forgot to mention "The itsy bitsy spider climbed up the water spout" in your AN
Good luck in my contest
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WHOOPS! How did I miss that? I'll fix that right away!
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One moment I'll love you
The next I will destroy you
And I'll laugh as your heart dies
...<3 those lines.. i really do... they're really powerful... even if the song sucks... lol
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