I love you, with all my heart.
Love that will never set us apart
Over my dead body, who dares try
Valor is my shield for those wary who pry
Envious or selfish, whoever they are.
Yes, they won't win in love and war
Only love so pure and true can conquer all
Unless the grave depart us, we will not fall.
summer51
Author notes
I Love You ! . . . with conviction. 
Now, I said it.... 
summer51
A contest entry
- Got something to say? Do it here by ratkos.
1200 points, ended November 28, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is beautiful and uplifting.Almost like wedding vows.Thank you
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Thank you, too, ratkos.
summer51
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One feels when affected by the grip of emotion that this poem contains. It has a bouncy flow and fresh content that I really enjoyed reading.
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Thank you for the nice comment. Well appreciated.
summer51
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Wow, summer at her vociferous best!
Shouting out loud, with dtermination!!!!
Good for you!!!
Mumsy
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Ha ha ha !
.... just trying to win here in the contest, Mumsy.
But... yeah... right.
Thanks again.
summer51
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good luck in the contest
you have said it
and
with much convictions
hugs Moony
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Hello, kismoony!
Hahaha.... it's a contest, eh...
But... Yeah.... right.
Thanks you, GF.
summer51
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Hi, Summer
very lucky whoever he is,,, and nice form, too.
Congratulations,,, wish you luck.
stay safe
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Oh... !
... that's your "real pic?" Ahahaha...
I didn't notice ah.
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omg, hello there stalzy
so good to see you here
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hello moon2u, nice to see you.
haven't been writing much, but
thought I would check this site out.
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always nice to see a friendly face here
welcome
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GF
Please tell your good friend here, stalzy41, to comment to some good writers/poets here, too....including YOU and MUMSY and all your friends... he's kinda shy and hand hurting if type much here, he said.
I noticed we're "growing" here, ah... those from SFF site.
... It's fun ! 
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Hi, Kiddo!!!
Hmmmm.... will ask "him" that... if he's really lucky...
Thanks, again for the visit and comment.
summer51
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