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First Kiss!

His smile warmed my heart
as I leaned forward to kiss him
for the very first time
knowing in my mind
that he was the one
who I would surrender
my body and soul to
and allow myself to be me
after a life long journey
of being everything
to everyone else
I knew,  it was the place
for my weary soul to rest
and be swept away
by love and romance
sheltered from all storms
letting the tides of love
wash away my fears
of never trusting again
but then, the storms came
"Grassy Sound" was destroyed
he took flight
to another safe harbor
where silence
rules his heart!

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  • vivuyo
    November 1
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    i remember the first time that i kissed my woman i had been courting with before.

    a verey nice poem!!!


  • Rick Weston silver member
    July 24
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    very sweet write, but did not see the final six lines coming. I like "letting the tides of love wash away my fears".

  • Valentines Sting
    January 20

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    first love it sounds wonderful. This sounds like a high school romance. I guess graduating high school splits a lot of couples up. Those were the days. great write and full of passion.
    Dennis

  • nathanieldaviddiaz2
    December 9, 2008
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    i loved it

    i loved ur poem it was amazing it kinda reminds me of me and my bf and how our love is.

  • Bob Fox
    October 28, 2008

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    Those days

    Those wonderful days seem longpast. Now distance by lies and deiet and the plague of the internet and it's fantasy world. I wish you luck dear poet.

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