heaven won't care if I said good-bye
only to deny your sanity
grasping grains of futile sand won't
save another life
testimonies don't always speak of
eternal life and death's embrace
she was almost home
Author notes
picture prompt (click to view)
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2424/413.jpg?1224683017
free verse
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by ennovy.
700 points, ended October 31, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh the last few lines of this was lovely and touching to say the least! Beaughtiful
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A great take on the pic prompt!!!!
Very well done
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excellent
So very well done. A wonderfully expressed write. Best of luck in the contest.
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Short, but to the point and well written. If you compare the first line with the last, it pretty much tells the story of all of us. Good luck in the contest, and thank you for entering.
Novy & Brazos -
excellent writing! good luck in the contest.
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