autumns fallen leaves
formed a soft carpet of gold
on the tree lined path
Author notes
http://musejunkie.deviantart.com/art/Carpet-of-Leaves-68374748
Mariana
A contest entry
- Fall into Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended October 29, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The seasons. by headintheclouds.
400 points, ended November 4, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haiku by Kathraina.
900 points, ended January 5, 42 entries
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Comments
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a good poem, ah the wonder of autumn, i want to run down that path now and kick leaves like when i was a kid.
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fantastic imagery! great job on this piece
♥ Kathraina -
Great discription of the picture in this haiku. I dont have much evxpereince with haikus. (you know haiku is a funny word really say it 5 times fast haiku haiku haiku haiku haiku haiku! lol!) but as far as my experience goes i would say thiss is an excellant HAIKU!
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Great imagery
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autumns fallen leaves
formed a soft carpet of gold
on the tree lined path
This is very beautiful, with the gentleness of a lovely haiku wrapped up in autumn's glory. Thank you so much.
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Stunning
What a beautiful pic
And descbribed so perfectly.
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very nice
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nice entry .. good luck in the contest !!
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