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This feeling

I have never felt this way before
What is this feeling?
Why is it that when I am with you
The whole world can no longer affect me?
Because you are the one I love?
You are the one I long for
I have this feeling every time you are around
What is this feeling?
Its so new
It so awkward
I fear that I am in love
And yet again I don’t know why
You are all I want before I die
This feeling is so beautiful
So answer me now.
Why this feeling?
What is this feeling?
This feeling that is so unknown
So speak, say the truth
Do you know?
Have you found such a feeling yourself?
This feeling has me oh, so lost…

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  • Wow, okay I found irony!! You posted this on my one year with Jake.

  • LunaLight
    October 22, 2008
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    that's really cute, good job :]


  • colorxmyxworld
    October 22, 2008

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    awww this is soooo sweet lol
    good writing it
    ~love amanda_bubblegum~

  • trisha28
    October 22, 2008
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    short sweet and to the point a very good write. if i was miss amanda i would be very touched


  • Broken Vow
    October 22, 2008

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    cute. i like the way you describe your feelings. its so true to what you do feel. straight from the heart. good job

  • Mistress Masquerade
    October 22, 2008

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    Beautiful. I would make a longer comment but I am in Spanish class and the teacher is walking over, Much love, Kiddo.

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