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Perfection

Truest is the kin of man
To deceive all that he can

Thinking forever
whilst achieving, never

Alas, beauty beseeches thee
And Angel wings open free

To the bold, a wish is granted
To the old, an idea is flaunted

Never to be seen again
and sight, none attain

Blind as they may be
and an eye that counts for three

And so, after searching around
Not knowing what is to be found

Ideas is what they need
And sin is what they feed

For no clear reason
In form of treason

Whilst the king is betrayed
The knife cannot be delayed

Therefore all cards are laid
and an empty hand is played

Yet, you see a flush
closed eyes, lying a blush

You think you see deception...
But what you witness is perfection.

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  • Luciferschild
    January 26

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    thank you for entering but it seems this poem lacks alot of imagery, besides that it was good, thank you for entering and good luck