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This love I cant explain

This love is one of envy
But I cannot understand it
I love you
But I feel my heart lies to me
I have broken all my rules
Just to be in love with you
But how can I trust this?
Love has betrayed me so much before
But I want happiness
I need happiness
I love you so much
There is no way to describe
This love of ours
So I simply state
No one will understand
This love I cant explain…

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wrote this when i was with amanda... about 2 years ago...

just want to kno what you think...

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  • HereComesTheSun
    October 28, 2008
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    i like the first line
    i mean it starts off by letting the reader into your mind
    bravo