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Broken

I miss the sense of knowing you,
Conversations deep and meaningful.
Talking for hours without a break,
Tears that flow like a lake.

A broken heart
No beat, no sound
Numbness and death
All around.

No birds singing in the trees
No time to stop the world from spinning
Tears flooding into rivers and seas.

A piece of you is forever with me,
Inside my heart you are still alive
Sheltered by the storms of life
I know that I will survive.

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  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    it hurts when you have sad memories. but being able to carry part of the person with you is comforting. this write is awesome. i think everyone to a certain extent can relate. your words are wonderful! great job!


  • going nowhere
    October 24, 2008

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    i know the feeling of always carrying a piece of someone with you... and knowing that no matter what, with that love still flickering inside, i can get through anything.


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    October 22, 2008

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    Wow I love this hun it's so powerful, passionate and poignant, the three p's I think are essential to any good work I will read more soon I have to work now see you tomorrow