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Dripping rain swells from above like endless tears
The gray black sky glisten with majesty beauty
It like our hearts beat as one as the tears slide my face

Time is a funny thing on this earth
It means so much while we are alive
Then when we are gone it ends

At least the rain nurtures our soil from above
The rain still beats down in a rhythm we do not understand

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  • WolfHeart
    October 22, 2008

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    Very nice work. I love the rain. It gives the earth a cloak of silence that is so soothing and peaceful.

    Dripping rain swells from above like endless tears
    The gray black sky glisten with majesty beauty
    It like our hearts beat as one as the tears slide my face. . . love this part.

    I have been praying you might not leave us, but I want to see you happy and at peace.

    hugs and comfort, Wolfie