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Undeterred

day and night will flow as usual,
even on that occasion, when my mind
perhaps will not like to move a little,
forlorn, banished, unwanted I may be;
still I will walk on in my great journey
from life to life on the path having little respite
till I reach You oh no fear, no death
I like to be engulfed in  Your divine light for bliss.

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  • HyperSoccergal8
    November 3

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    great write! I love the strength that shows through your words, thank you for entering and good luck =]


  • Meroza
    April 15

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    This poem is very cheereful, and your words are strong and well spoken. A well penned poem.
    Thank you for entering

  • crosscountry07
    February 25

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    This is beautiful. I wish Marcus himself could read it. There is no fear in death when we have Faith. Thanks so much for entering and GOOD LUCK in my contest! -Liz

  • a lovely write

  • Judith Chandler
    November 6, 2008

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    That's a good point about day and night flowing as usual, even if you don't. It also sounds like your faith is something that comforts you.

    Nice write.


  • sOuL
    November 4, 2008
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    thanks for joining my contest


  • ourgirlFriday
    November 3, 2008
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    interesting...


  • glitterydoom
    November 2, 2008

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    thankyou for entering the contest my freind made for me

    I really liked this, it just seemed to flow

    good luck


  • Salt Therapy
    October 28, 2008
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    Wow this is great!! :]

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