day and night will flow as usual,
even on that occasion, when my mind
perhaps will not like to move a little,
forlorn, banished, unwanted I may be;
still I will walk on in my great journey
from life to life on the path having little respite
till I reach You oh no fear, no death
I like to be engulfed in Your divine light for bliss.
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great write! I love the strength that shows through your words, thank you for entering and good luck =]
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This poem is very cheereful, and your words are strong and well spoken. A well penned poem.
Thank you for entering
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This is beautiful. I wish Marcus himself could read it. There is no fear in death when we have Faith. Thanks so much for entering and GOOD LUCK in my contest! -Liz


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a lovely write
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That's a good point about day and night flowing as usual, even if you don't. It also sounds like your faith is something that comforts you.
Nice write.
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thanks for joining my contest
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interesting...
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thankyou for entering the contest my freind made for me
I really liked this, it just seemed to flow
good luck
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Wow this is great!! :]
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