In from the cold and by the fireplace we sit,
warming each other from the bitter chill.
I run my fingers through her soft blonde hair,
as I kiss her cherry red lips.
Caressing her ample breasts while my fingers,
circling around her hard erect nipples.
Pulling off her shirt I kiss her neck,
moving down to her chest loosening her pants.
I tug on her pants removing them,
seeing she wasn't wearing any panties.
Damn....that even turned me on more,
as I covered her hard nipple with my mouth.
One hand on her other nipple,
brushing it gently with my finger tips.
My other hand moves down between her smooth thighs,
she lets out a soft moan calling my name.
Running my fingers down her stomach,
I open her slit with my fingers.
Seeing the wettness of her pussy,
I bend down to feast on her delicacy.
Licking the sweetness from her as she makes more,
I suck on her hard mother of pearl between her lips.
Grabbing her hips for support not wanting to come up for air,
I insert two fingers inside her.
Stroking her pussy with my fingers,
I suck and flick her jewel with my stiff tongue.
Moaning uncontrollably she moves her hips swiftly,
while I push my fingers into her deeper.
Removing my fingers slowly from her pussy,
I get up to retrieve my strap-on.
Watching me put it on she gives my a smile,
Rubbing her own clit at the same time.
After putting on the strap-on,
I turn her over doggy style.
Slapping her ass and grabbing onto her hips,
I push the strap-on eagerly inside her.
Pulling her into me with each stroke,
she passionately screams for more.
Leaning into her caressing her breasts,
I push in even deeper with every stroke.
Just having a baby a few months ago,
she was still lactating.
Breast milk spraying all over the floor,
the more aroused she was getting more milk was flowing.
Flipping her over on her back I enter her again,
stroking her walls of her pussy even faster.
Sucking on her nipples gently,
milk runs down the sides of her breasts.
Her long legs grip around my waist,
she moans "I'm going to cum."
Moaning louder and louder,
her body shakes with one last thrust.
Pulling out of her I bend over,
licking all the sweet nectar she released.
looking into her eyes with a grin I say,
"Another night of satifaction before you go home to your husband".
Author notes
I do not claim the picture being used with this write as my own. Picture by David Schoen
A contest entry
- Convince Me to Stay on Allpoetry! by crosscountry07.
750 points, ended November 10, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "Let's Get It On" by Loversdance.
400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cheater's Club #3-adults only-pre-writes welcome by alaskanamber.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Erotica by XInsanity-FairX.
700 points, ended January 13, 23 entries
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Comments
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Very Exotic
Wow! Makes me a little hot under the collar. -
Wow!Extreme heat turned up!
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niiiice
this is certainly hottt and a half
wonderfull
well done, thanks for entering and good luck
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Removing my fingers slowly from her pussy,
I get up to retrieve my strap-on.
Watching me put it on she gives my a smile,
Rubbing her own clit at the same time.
After putting on the strap-on,
I turn her over doggy style.
Slapping her ass and grabbing onto her hips,
I push the strap-on eagerly inside her.
Damn, and this only won the bronze! It was as good as gold to me, Baby! And you know how I feel about a woman with a strap-on who knows how to use it! Care to cum by to use it on a naughty pet like me? HE! HE!
As I also love a lactating woman - the lines below had me stroking and a choking my chicken - spanking me monkey - PULLING IT - HARD AND FUNKY to those lines also - which make three time today that I have JACKED and SHOT to your juicy pieces today. Damn, IF I keep cuming and licking up me mess like this I'm going to have to buy a whole new wardrobe as DESSERT 3 times a day can be very fattening BUT CREAMY AND YUMMY in me tummy nonetheless! LOL!!!
Just having a baby a few months ago,
she was still lactating.
Breast milk spraying all over the floor,
the more aroused she was getting more milk was flowing.
Flipping her over on her back I enter her again,
stroking her walls of her pussy even faster.
Sucking on her nipples gently,
milk runs down the sides of her breasts.
And what her husband doesn't know won't hurt him - as I can keep a secret, Baby! HE! HE!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
Feel free to send me more links the next time you are here as they are sweet and sensual indeed!
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Beautifully wet and wild as you never disappoint girl.
Well Done....Best wishes in the contest
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ga l you are a mess i am far from crazy its alot to this poem that speaks clear as day i peep you you are so not slick well if i fetch me some ass on here lol i will get to writing
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wow i can truly say i think you WON this contest if you didn't the contest maker is a retard .LOL
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HUH!
Ok so that's what I say when I'm speechless!!! This was hot and erotic and on topic. Being a woman, I have a breast fixation, as you, the author, portray in this piece. wild and crazy with all the other parts, a very nice write indeed. Here's my gold star of approval!!! -
Very...VERY...hot...HOT
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Great write! Very vivid.
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I would have to agree with the others that this is your forte genre. You use a lot of great descriptive language. I can't help but feel a little sorry for her husband, lol. Thank you for entering! Good luck in the contest! -Liz
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Smoldering hot! I like how you described her "lactating breasts" it really added to the sensuality and steaminess of the lovemaking. Sinfully wonderful writing to the core
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WOW! to hot to handle, to hot to hold, girl you really got it going on...you must be the Queen of erotic poetry..
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HOT
WOW YOU KNOW HOW TO GET THE JUICES FLOWING
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damm gf this is hot stuff
this is definately your genre
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Very good
you write incredible love
stories of passion.
They always make my body
pulsate with desire.
You are a very romantic lady
that knows what she wants and
when and where she wants it.
Dreams fantasies, are they really?
Only those who know could tell.
But of course they never will.
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WOW!! This was steamy. I love the way you create vivid pictures with your words, you got me hot ova here!!! Great poem!!
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WOW
What can I say, when you've got it, you got it and you've definitely got it. A good nice sexy write
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Terrific!
You've got it, a versatile style that lives up to true erotica! -
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Damn girl i love your mind.. very good..
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you are deicious
i am leaving! it to much for the neo soul artist you are so devilish i like this put it in a list are something
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WOW!! You did your thing on this heated write! I love it!
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Excellent
Oh my another hot an steamy write. You are so good at these. The voice of experience.
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'Pulling out of her I bend over
licking all the sweet nectar she released
looking into her eyes with a grin I say
"Another night of satisfaction before you go home to your husband"'
Wow...
I wonderif anything could bemore erotic and more satisfaction-giving than this!
So utterly evil, sinful, lustful, and beautiful!
'Breast milk spraying all over the floor
the more aroused she was getting more milk was flowing'
So sweet!
So very sweet!
I'd love to feed myself on her...and on you...
Sinful kisses, my lustful lady!...you deserve them....
Galaxy2
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Damn, this is awesome girl!
I love the story and imagery in this.
Lovely work with this HOT piece!
Jeremy0826
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i so love dhis shidd...who can compete
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Queen of Erotica!!
Another poem of Satisfaction!!!! Heated, risky, sexy write!!!!
"Another night of satisfaction before you go home to your husband".------Love that part!!!
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sensual erotic read, i am breathless from the heat of these words and the images are burned into my mind.bravo
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Damn! I always read these first thing in the morning! Really gets me going! Hot hot hot write! Going to have to save your poems and read them while I am at home if you know what I mean!
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INCREDIBLE!!
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GAWD!!
Now just how is hubby gonna compete with that? l.o.l. yeah, another smoking blazer lady!!
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Very hot and well detailed, a feast for the mind's eye. Might have to come back to this one later lol
Good write.
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Complete satisfaction
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