I'm on my own,
Sat in my room,
A song starts slow,
And then it will bloom.
It runs through my vains,
It calls out my name.
When it plates in my ear,
I forget my pain.
Music is my life,
My life is one song,
All my true friends
Will choose to sing along.
My thoughts are the lyrics,
My heart is the beat.
The tune my life plays,
Is the one that suits me
So let it flow through your vains,
Let it blow your mind,
You'll be supprised
When reality gets left behind.
A contest entry
- Lotsa Options.. Come and see!!! by FightOffYourDemons.
550 points, ended December 8, 2008, 35 entries
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It's a bit cheasy but i hope you liked it :)
Comments
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it is a bit cheesy but in a good way.
I could really feel this and get into it.
It had good flow and imagery, i felt like I was right there in the song and everything
Great job this is fantastic!
Oh, one thing, thought not thaught.
Small fix.
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