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Always and Forever were Delivered Yesterday

Hey you...

 

I sent you a parcel, they told me it would have been delivered yesterday.
I know it is a little larger than normal,
but I'm hoping to convince you to stay.

It took some time to pack all I could in there,
I hope it is enough.

The box is my heart,
and there within I have packed for you:
A life, hoping that when you share it it will complete
the puzzle you've been working so hard on.
I've squeezed in as much love as I could to protect
it's walls.
On the top I've layered some hope,
strength  and comfort just in case.
I thought I'd be cheeky and hidden a
screaming match or two to keep you on your toes.
I sealed the box with faith for good measure,
and wraped it up with me.

I hope this package has reached you in time.
You asked me what was the point of staying,
I hope this will help.

Forever and always.

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  • Jesann gold member
    April 14

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    A very creative write..
    "I thought I'd be cheeky and hidden a
    screaming match or two to keep you on your toes"
    I'm glad the box is filled with love !!!!


    • Edited
      April 14
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      k

      a screaming hey, well nothing like blowing a bit of steam. thanks


  • Denerica
    November 21, 2008
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    Just loved how what you have to offer is wrapped up as a gift to someone, awesome write. Blessings


  • trekkergirl
    October 25, 2008

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    This is a very creative poem. Full of imagery and hopeful suggestions. And hopeful wishes. I like this very much. I just wanted to let you know it is a wonderful write. And thanks for sharing it and thanks for joining it in my contest.

  • piccola silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    filled with imagination too. I was thinking along the lines of
    "you said you would love me forever and always ... but that must have come yesterday because it's over ... no matter it was just a promp.

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