i want to
tell you
how I feel
so it won't be this
huge burning secret
this anchor
around my heart
keeping me captive
to the thought
of you
however you respond
i
would be free
i want to ask
how you feel
i'm dying to know
if you think
of me
do you think
i'm beautiful?
smart?
mysterious?
do you want to ask
me what i think
about anything?
i want to know you
what you think
about...everything
where you've been
what you did
there
and why
who hurt you
who loved you
your past
your present
and especially
your future
and if you want me
to
be part of it
A contest entry
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Comments
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this is great, i used to write like you. keep writing.
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i can definitely relate to this .This write portrays the hesitation and shyness that goes along with a conversation of this sort .i loved it Thank you for the awesome write
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This is a great write, thanks for sharing, I know what it is like to have a crush I think most people do and I could relate to this. There a lot of really good parts in this poem, keep it up!
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