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Marking Time



Twilight found me
standing at my window.
Waiting for something new.
The same question in my head.
What is my destiny?
Am I never to be allowed to  breath
the sweet scent of Loves flower?
Am I to forever live with the scar
of my one youthful wrong deed.
I  can not smile as I back away
from My lonely  tower window.
Tomorrow I will send another message
to My Father the King.
But for tonight I will continue to mark time.





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I used all the words. great contest

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    October 22, 2008
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    Awww well done for using them all ^^
    I love the fantasy feel to this, I'm a big fan of fantasy writing

    I think my favourite lines were:

    "Twilight found me
    standing at my window.
    Waiting for something new.
    The same question in my head.
    What is my destiny?"

    Great write and I wish you the best of luck;

    Claire x