Around the bend, I watched you go
Around the bend, you walked so slow
Up the street, is where you walked
Up the street, I followed and stalked
Through the park, I saw you run
Through the park, you were having fun
To your door, whistling a tune
To your door, still following you
In your room, your eyes looked scared
In your room, at you I stared
On your bed, lying so drained
On your bed, the feelings I gained
Author notes
haha yer I know it sucks but whatever...
For abuse contest: Emily Auld
A contest entry
- ABUSE - looking for poems to be published :) by DramaQueen469.
550 points, ended October 25, 2008, 58 entries
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Comments
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this poem does not suck its great and its a winner in my eyes you are a great writer and this is a great poem one of the best i have ever seen keep the pen flowing hope to read more
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Interesting style. Thanks!
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Hmm, I wonder if I should be afriad of you...
That was so to-the-point.
You are an amazing writer. -
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haha no don't be afraid! yer im slightly strange but im good at heart lol
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oh my goodness and your only 14 years old
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is that bad? lol
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ehhhh, so to the point, kinda makes me feel wrong to like it. so simple but hardcore. just makes your skin crawl. good job
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NOOOO, no it doesn't suck it's FANTASTIC!! I am so impressed; WELL DONE and thankyou for entering this piece.
~*~DramaQueen469~*~
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