My love for you is like the sea,
let it draw you from the shore.
Let its spray cool your tired face,
and frolic in the pleasure of its waves.
Become one with the rhythm, succumb to the strength
let yourself be carried away...
drown yourself in the depths of my love.
Author notes
you can search the horizon my love, but you'll never truly know how far it goes ♥
A contest entry
- Love, Love, Love by Wolven Roses.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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Thank you. Its very nice and the metaphor makes it that much more passionate.
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