How much longer must I wait
To find the way of cruel fate
Will love ever concour all
Or cause the pyramids to fall
Absents makes the heart grow fonder
Even those that seem to wonder
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unfinished 10-22-2008
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the reason why it has yet to be finished for you feel the love in your heart and no matter how strong it is, the other person may not reciprocate it in a similar fashion. all a heart wants to do is to be given completely to another one so the soul can rejoice in love, laughter and life. i do wish this upon you some day and may it be sooner than later, DARK.
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sorry
Somehow I missed your comment on this one. I know it was a long time ago, but you're comment fits for today somehow. And you're so right about love not being "reciprocated in a simlar fashion." Can two people really love each other in the same way, or will it always be two different kinds of love, clashing and meshing together? It seems hopeless sometimes. You always seem to have something to say that's so fitting for the circumstance. Thank you.
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i believe itz called wisdom by living life. i have had several birtdays since posting my age of 259 on my page. maybe i have gotten wiser about love and pain by now. to answer your question, yes, but eventually one will love the other more which makes it almost impossible for maintaining a relationship. look at me, residing at the DARKside of the moon with good reason, you can join me up here at any time(hehehe), DARK.
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I like this poem alot, it bears a strong message in the form of philosophy and problematic questions. Very well done.
Silvos.
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Hey, are you back? Or still over seas? I haven't been on all poetry in ages, been working a lot, two jobs. I hope you're doing okay.
Pixie
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