Cream colored, heated by hand strung jewels
each bead recounting all ways the flesh dance.
Erect beads on perky mounds of dark pools
hardening with the warm touch of romance.
Different positions beneath the moonlight
sets a new bead upon the string of love.
Hints of honey fell from her well of delight
and his hunger was fed, more then enough.
Sweet beads of perspiration lined our forms
each lost treasure had been found and claimed.
Strung together in the mist of lusts storms
each glorious moment became inflamed.
Passionate red glows across her cream skin
as the pattern of love circles again.
Author notes
Sensual Pic. Prompt (Adult)
Tell me what you see...tantalize my mind with your best imagery. Impress with with your metaphoric writing talents. I want to read your beautiful
Oh well wasnt suppose to rhyme. Hmm. Sorry. I didnt like the free verse one i penned for it liked my sonnet best.
A contest entry
- Sensual Pic. Prompt (Adult) by nevadapoet.
500 points, ended October 23, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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amazing piece i think it should have gotten more then an honorable mention though in my eyes its a gold winner! congrats anyway loved it gorgeous
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well they wanted free verse and I couldnt do it that way it didnt seem to fit lol.
glad you enjoyed it :
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I liked your sonnet also...a great pleasure to read from a pic prompt that is pretty specific...the beads, most entries forgot the beads. I love your imagery and the metaphors. Very nicely done.
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Loved it. ^_^
Brilliantly written. And right on with sensuality. Well done. -
very sensual..
and sweetly sexy as if I expected anything less. you are the best lady!!
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sweet and metapohorical sensual sonnet, for you as for me, rhyme and meter are much freer expression than "Free Verse".
Beautiful writing.
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well I do tend to try to do my best, and yet, others rank higher in ones eye. One more then I am through penning them.
Enjoy the last
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Beautifully written sweetheart, an excellent write for this contest. Best of luck baby, I love you...Scott
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I could get lost in this poem reading it time and time again. I love it as I love the author.
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What a beautiful write you've penned
for this picture. I hope that you do well
with it in this contest! Good luck to you
my dear friend and take care!
Jeremy0826
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