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Ill Wine

Unwilling to subside
I drench myself,
in her putrid wine

Divinity, insanity
they come in pairs
Her empty mind
shrivels and dies

Burned out,
fading into
nothingness.

Neglected, I run.

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  • JabberWokk
    November 17, 2008
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    Hell YES you can!

    Pick your favorite, and I'll send you the meaning of each line.

    Also there are loads more, you just have to go look through them all.


  • eslydd
    November 13, 2008
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    GUILTY of being too NICE!!!

    I don't understand completely... but that's ok. I love your style of Poetry! Can I use some of you Poems to teach my Students?? If so, can you give me your favourite one with total Explanation? Cos I don't wanna be like, umm... NEXT LINE, I don't know what that one means... lol