Can we make a promise
to be together always
to forget the past and problems
to forget the way things were?
Can we make a promise
to show that we're in love
to be with each other forever
to be our one and only?
Can we make a promise
to live like we want to
to love like we have to
to feel like we should?
Can we make a promise?
I really hope we can.
For I have made this promise,
I just need your hand.
I would appreciate feedback!
Comments
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This had a really nice rythm to it, well done. Keep it up :]]
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Sweet
It's definitely not gay Emmy-Lou. I think it's very good. You're very talented, so you shouldnt get so down on yourself. I loved it! *sends love* -
gay
really gay



