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[ Can we make a promise ]

Can we make a promise
to be together always
to forget the past and problems
to forget the way things were?

Can we make a promise
to show that we're in love
to be with each other forever
to be our one and only?

Can we make a promise
to live like we want to
to love like we have to
to feel like we should?

Can we make a promise?
I really hope we can.
For I have made this promise,
I just need your hand.

I would appreciate feedback!

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  • CharleeBoy
    December 29, 2008
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    This had a really nice rythm to it, well done. Keep it up :]]


  • AngeloftheNight
    November 24, 2008

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    Sweet

    It's definitely not gay Emmy-Lou. I think it's very good. You're very talented, so you shouldnt get so down on yourself. I loved it! *sends love*


  • fall from grace
    November 16, 2008
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    gay

    really gay