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~~Just Believe~~

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Just believe in yourself
And all that you are within

Just believe with the care and comfort
You give so much
Will return to you

Believe if you hurt, you will heal back
And the pain will go away

Believe in all good wishes
And in return
Love and happiness
Will be yours to recieve

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  • Just4u
    October 25, 2008

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    Life is dual oh yes it is
    so bad can't hang around
    So all we need is holding on
    to get back and be refound

    Life if comes alas we choose
    to where will head from here
    Till step by step we find at last
    that place without the tears

    Hugs...Eddy

  • Pietro456
    October 24, 2008

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    Wow I ike this poem 11

    i really like thsi poem. I like the positive message it is giving to people.I think this person is a very talenetd writer ! Keep up the great work.


  • Concrete Angel silver member
    October 23, 2008

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    I always love that you write such hopeful inspirational poetry. It's definately your strong suit. I like this, it's light and beautiful and full of warmth. This is one of those poems that everyone needs to have access to when they're down!


  • Mary O gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    On this positive note I'm ready for the day :)

    Lovely words, Blush, and so true. 'Tis in the giving for which we receive, yes. And I must add, you are and have always been an exceptional giver of love. As well, and I agree, as you put so tenderly here, one must "Just Believe" in the goodness of themselves of which Love reigns.

    Enjoyed this positive and upbeat gem to begin my day
    Good luck to you,
    ~Mary O


  • The-Doctors-Angel31 silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    This is very beautifully written. I love your words in this piece a lot. I enjoyed the read!!!


  • melphleg gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Certainly an encouraging word. I does convey positive thinking and offers hope. I'm not in agreement with the philosophy but that is just my personal opinion.


  • FloatingFlower
    October 22, 2008
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    Nice poem

    Very good


  • Melodies
    October 22, 2008

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    A fine message, beautifully written for us to enjoy and adopt as good advice. I am so glad for positive thinking.


  • Sprite silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    This is beautiful and goes right to the core of what life is about and therefor does give great advice when writing poetry.

    Whatever it is, if we don't believe in it and in ourselves, it will not be truly successful.

    I love the soft tone and positive attitude. Short or long, this is very good! ~ Joyce


  • daviscth
    October 22, 2008

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    Even thou it is short this is a beautiful inspirational poem. I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest dear.


  • Maureen silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    Inspiring words!

    Hey Sis!
    What we believe, we can achieve! Thank you for reminding us of that!

    Best of Luck in this contest!

    Love,
    ♥ Maureen


  • thegoldenpen
    October 22, 2008
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    Excellent

    So very true!!! I love your poem! It teaches a lesson in each line!


  • Danna Hobart
    October 22, 2008

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    What great and encouraging words, Susan. They actually helped to make me feel better. It has been a long, hard day today, but tomorrow will be a better one.


  • bubbasamuel
    October 22, 2008

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    very very apt for what i am going through right now. your poem was like a soothing balm to my soul. As always your composition rocks. Loved it.


  • Quiet places
    October 21, 2008

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    Very inspirational my friend! I enjoyed this poem. So much truth in your words. Great job, Don


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 21, 2008

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    I need to cling to these words right now. Thank you for these words of hope and promise, Sis.

    spelling - receive


  • earthstar
    October 21, 2008

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    I love the picture and your words are so very true. I
    think those are the toughest words to live by when we see others who are better off then we are. I think what really matters what in our heart. some day we leave this world behind. I love it very much

    brenda


  • penman gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Oh my this was great. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    beautifully penned

    this is awesome and inspirational.. the content of hope picks ones spirit right up, thank you for sharing this as you do, very nicely penned...good luck in this contest
    YOUR SIS
    Linda


  • Rclane
    October 21, 2008
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    Nicely penned to the thought. Best to you in contest.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Very beautiful and inspirational. Well written..best of luck my friend.

    Linda

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