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Yesterdays promises (Left align)

 

 

 

 

Stepping through the stone of heaven and earth

seeing a reflection of  'Once what was mine.

Only the fading sun seems to cloud my memories

of these past judgements that I've hastily made.

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They will forever remain within this heart

never to allow a second chance to change my path.

Tears fall upon "An Angels shoes" with pain

leaving only the scars of ~Yesterdays Promises.

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My heart is filled with overflowing sunshine

from this loving spirit that guides my soul.

The skie's dim hue of greys still settle in my heart

while the Wind Whispers for a gentler day.

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Trees let go of lifeless leaves and softly drift away

as the season takes on a brand new transformation.

I shall watch over you within the windows of time

to a spring morning that fell on Yesterdays Promises.

 

 

 

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 22, 2008
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    the only thing i can even think to say here is keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Shakes-spear
    October 22, 2008
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    Very nice

    You will never forget and why would you want too. Remember the good times and let go of the bad. The trees do, so you can too. Each year the trees leave behind something of them and come alive again. Your loss was great and I know of your pain, but Adam is with you everyday! Look around and you see him in everything. Remember that star out the window! I love you Bro. The Shaker


  • grannyeri gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    Think we know our loved ones are watching over us, sometimes sending us little whisps of hints, help when we need it most. Liked the flow and the rhythm of these lines; as well as the sentiments you have expressed so well here.


  • earthstar
    October 21, 2008
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    This made me cry it a very wonderful way to remember the ones you love. It touched my heart very much. I have much grief to bear this year with the lost of a husband and brother and two deaths of my friends. I knew it would make me cry by the title. I knew it would be very touching great job.


    • getsbetter
      October 22, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment my friend, and I am very sorry for that much loss to be carried upon your heart. It is nice to talk with you again...GETS

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